This World, Dark World

[Wanderer of the Mountains]

Our world is turning dark,
Slowly and steadily,
The sword of war gleams red with blood,
And anger clouds block out the sky.

So few are left,
Hanging on to the past,
Clinging to the Oaths,
Is this where morality becomes a powdered gem?

Secrets and Lies,
Double-dealing and back-stabbing,
Our world has fallen hard and fast,
Can it be revived or is the darkness doomed to last?

Even the more noble few,
Are tainted by the shadows woo,
Night is falling before the sun has reached it's zenith....
Is today the end?

Or......
Just another trial for us to face,
To prove our worth to any around,
To fend off the darkness a little longer.

There's two paths left,
The wall has crumbled before them,
And now we must choose,
To follow morality or lose our soul.....

Travel the broad, yet smooth path and fail....
Succumbing to the darkness,
Or travel the route that is hard to see and rough by touch,
Revealing the truth behind the shadows for good.

Face the fear of the ultimate darkness,
For if you are brave enough,
It has no power over you,
And you shall stand victorious....

A light....
Nay a beacon,
For all humanity........

[Ray]

Wow, that's... deep. But I really like how you touched on some of those issues. It's really pretty how you can turn words into a poem. Way to go, Ri.

[Wanderer of the Mountains]

Leia, I noticed you've said that with alot of my poems, but I'm confused. What do you mean when you say it's deep? Sorry I'm singling it out, but I don't understand it.

[Ray]

Well, when a poem is 'light', then its light-hearted and possibly funny. Or something like it. I find that u write with so much passion, fixing on one problem or another. This is not to offend, its just that its so emotional and soulful. It's nice when u write like that, but i know i took it the wrong way at first. But i understood it the second time reading it. Thats all i can really give for advice. Love you!! (dont be offended, please}

[Wanderer of the Mountains]

Offended? Nah..... if anythng I'm blushing right now....... Never thought of my poems that way.

[Shalrae]

lol, well atleast there is not another fight. hehe. Well I really liked it. I am not the best at poems as I found out for the poem project. they take so much thinking for me.

[Ray]

You should know by now that Riley and I fight quite a lot... although.... I like his poems too. I wish I could be so great.

[Wanderer of the Mountains]

I'm not that great. I just get an idead and write it down as fast as i can.

[Ray]

It's still cool!!

[Wanderer of the Mountains]

no it's not..... Some one PM me an idea for another poem because I'm tired and can't think of anything.... Please and thank you.

[Ray]

Fine, then. Its HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! muhahahahaha!!1

[Wanderer of the Mountains]

Yeah, I was so hot after the dance you could have cooked eggs on me. Sudden humorous image....... Hmm....... Anyways....... WWWWWHHHHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Ray]

Only a guy would think of cooking eggs on himself after dancing..... jk jk. Just dont serve me the eggs, k? i no likey eggs!

[Wanderer of the Mountains]

After I made them into Seafood Quiche? I think not. Then you'd love eggs for sure.

[Ray]

Seafood??? UGHH!!!!!!!!!!!! I dont like much seafood!! ewwwwwwwwwww........................... i still think ure poem is awesome, and im sure ur cooking is too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Wanderer of the Mountains]

lmao, you'll see. I promise you'll love my cooking.

[Ray]

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